Decision: Accepted!!!
College: LSA
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): N/A
ACT (breakdown): Composite: 28 (Reading: 34, English: 28, Science: 26, Math: 25, Writing: 10)
SAT II (place score in parentheses): N/A
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.73
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A, I cannot be ranked since I transferred schools, however for comparison if I was able to be ranked I would be number 9 or 10 out of 150 seniors.
AP: Government (4), World History (4), Latin (4), English (4) I took all of these senior year
IB (place score in parentheses): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: Concert Choir, Physics, AP English, AP Government, PreCalculus, Health, Careers, Sociology
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Nothing Major here
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Tutor, Choir, Piano, Violin, Mock Trial, Debate, Track and Cross, Newspaper (Editor), Yearbook
Job/Work Experience: Piano Teacher
Volunteer/Community Service: I would volunteer at the library, pregnancy counseling clinics, tutoring kids at a boys and girls club, and coached elementary volleyball
Summer Activities: Camp for amputees/paralytics where I was a volunteer
Essays (rating 1-10, details):: I spent a lot of time on my essays for U of M, two months to write and edit them. I liked how they turned out. I focused on my previous history at U of M, how school had impacted my decision to apply (I had kind of a unique story to tell). For the essay about our roles in our community I wrote about my church, going to an extremely religious school, and becoming an atheist. For the main essay I wrote about the U of M Health System- I lived there for a month when I was 7 in the hospital- I began with an anecdote about the playground on the 8th floor and expanded from there about U of M, visiting Ann Arbor, their programs etc… and for the shortest essay I wrote about Piano/Violin.
Teacher Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):: Well… I don’t know what they said since I signed the waiver on Common App… so…
Counselor Rec (rating 1-10, details):: Again I don’t know what he said
Additional Rec (rating 1-10, details)::
Interview: N/A
Other
Applied for Financial Aid? Yes
State (if domestic applicant): MI
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Private Parochial, then Public Senior Year
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: 40-60k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First gen student, previous history with U of M (lived in the hospital for a month and I based my essays on this), met with admissions staff (but didn’t interview) many times, toured the campus etc…
Reflection I applied on Dec. 24th. When I apply to colleges (unless their safety schools) I act like each one is a reach school- I apply to each school like each college is Harvard. I spend a lot of time on the essays and try to pick something out that is unique (Ex. I spent hours online looking for inspiration when I applied to Notre Dame and eventually settled on a picture in one of the guidebooks they sent me).
Strengths: My essays, and extracurricular activities (for ECs I participate in amputee events and have qualified for Nationals 2 times).
Weaknesses: My ACT was lower than their median which worried me
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I believe my in state status helped, along with my extended interest in MI.
Where else you are applying or have already applied: Alma, Albion, Kalamazoo, Adrian, Carleton, Williams, Notre Dame, Scripps, Bowdoin, Colby (I’ve been accepted at all so far but Bowdoin, Williams, and Notre Dame- which I haven’t gotten letters back from)
General Comments/Advice/Hindsight: Good luck to everyone that applied! I hope you do well!