<p>This will be interesting. I assume that I will receive a rejection, but lets see what you guys think.
** Trinity**</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 1490/1600 (760 CR, 730 M, 555 W [Essay 12/12]
[li] ACT: N/A[/li][</em>] SAT II: This will kill me… USH: 760/800, Chem: 620/800
[<em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.7, Probably lower cause of Mid-year report…
[</em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 5%
[<em>] AP (place score in parenthesis): US History (5), Chemistry (4), English Lang (5), Biology (4), Art History (5), US Gov, English Lit, Calc AB
[</em>] IB (place score in parenthesis):
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: AP US Government, US Government Honors, Economics Honors, General Psychology at local CC, AP Calc AB, AP English Literature, Physics Honors
[</em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Umm…nothing major at IMO. AP Scholar w/ Distinction, some Community service award from the White House…yeah not much lol.
[/ul]Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): SGA (Vice- President), Love Letters: Random Cards of Kindness (Chapter founder & President), Understand Me Founder and President, Spanish Club, Varsity Cross Country…a lot of community service, see below.
[</em>] Job/Work Experience: Worked all four years of HS, due to the economy, I work 30-40 hours of week this year.
[<em>] Volunteer/Community service: 750+ Hours, Chapter director of a non-profit organization, Founder and President of a non-profit I am starting, MDA Camp Counselor, HOBY Counselor, Boys State Junior Counselor…a few other stuff
[</em>] Summer Activities: Hugh O’ Brian Youth Leadership, Bank of America Student Leaders, Boys State, MDA Camp Junior Counselor…and having fun with my friends haha
[<em>] Essays: Excellent, I can PM them to you guys if you want.
[</em>] Teacher Recommendation: One was really good, said that I was the type of students that English teachers pray to get, the other was average.
[<em>] Counselor Rec: Good, kinda redudent and just talked about my accomplishments…but did verify that I am starting my own national level organization. Overall, it was good but not mind-blowing.
[</em>] Additional Rec: N/A
[<em>] Interview: He said that he will give an excellent recommendation, and that if he was an adcom, that I would have been accepted.
[/ul]Other[ul]
[</em>] State (if domestic applicant): FL
[<em>] Country (if international applicant):
[</em>] School Type: Public
[<em>] Ethnicity: Afghan, son of refugees
[</em>] Gender: Male
[<em>] Income Bracket: Under 50k
[</em>] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First generation, had to work to help supplement my family’s income, starting my own organization,
[/ul]Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: ECs, personal qualities, AP scores, CR + M score
[</em>] Weaknesses: Writing score, GPA could be higher, one average recommendation
[li] Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected:[/li][/ul]General Comments: I also sent a letter talking about how in my junior year I was in and out of the hospital for over 4 months and that the doctors thought I had cancer. I also talked about how working so much through out high school taught me the importance of education and how it I realize that education is the key to open doors for me.</p>
<p>Good luck to all!</p>