<p>I agree with the “show, not tell” advice, and also be wary of overgeneralizing. try to shift the focus away from “how they’re flawed from being like this and I’m not.” try to rework it to be very subtle and more tasteful</p>
<p>I agree with the “show, not tell” advice, and also be wary of overgeneralizing. try to shift the focus away from “how they’re flawed from being like this and I’m not.” try to rework it to be very subtle and more tasteful</p>