College Application Essay

<p>Hey,</p>

<p>Can anyone look over my college essay?
If someone can, can someone revise it as well?</p>

<p>Thank you
Send me a private message</p>

<p>I need this ASAP
I really need some help</p>

<p>PLEASE</p>

<p>i need help desperately srsly</p>

<p>i am not that fluent in english so i need help from people whose english is their first language</p>

<p>THANKS</p>

<p>ill read it! PM me</p>

<p>can one of you read mine also???
thanks!!</p>

<p><a href=“https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZCoMsVRwMQy8qvRwZdYFHrt1AX3cEgRxiJoDFLrqHvU/edit?hl=en_US[/url]”>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZCoMsVRwMQy8qvRwZdYFHrt1AX3cEgRxiJoDFLrqHvU/edit?hl=en_US&lt;/a&gt;
this is for common app issue of concern to you.</p>

<p><a href=“https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIJzmU155wZGNH9oHOtxVO3MnYDbzfk8t4xhhnK13h8/edit?hl=en_US[/url]”>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aIJzmU155wZGNH9oHOtxVO3MnYDbzfk8t4xhhnK13h8/edit?hl=en_US&lt;/a&gt;
and this is for unc- tell about a time you have failed</p>