<p>Hello,</p>
<p>Before ask my question, I want to tell you my motives for this topic. First and foremost, right before my Junior year ended, the Dean of Academics at my school came up to me and strongly urged me to write about my childhood background (which implied my economic difficulties & immigration). I attend a college prep. private school, which costs about $35,000 a year. He told me that the private school accepted me and gave me a full ride because I have deserved it through hard work and that colleges should know that as well. He also told me that my close friend (attending Harvard), who had many similar stats as I do, wrote about a similar topic.</p>
<p>At a glance, the idea sparked great attention. I, too, believe it is a great idea to tell the colleges from my heart about how hard my childhood life was compared to the rich and spoon-fed students at my school.</p>
<p>Do you think this is a good idea for my essay? </p>
<p>I greatly appreciate your kindness!</p>