<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I am applying to suny Stony Brook and am considering to write about my immigration from Pakistan. I am thinking to write about how my life was there and what was important to me there. Than after immigration (I came last year), what is important to me now! </p>
<p>Tell me if its a strong topic to write about or not. also i need ideas of how to mate it stand out and creative. How should I improve on this idea if possible.</p>
<p>Thanks and Regards!</p>
<p>It sounds like it has the potential to be a really strong essay. I’m not familiar with the essay prompt for Stony Brook. Could you tell me what it is?</p>
<p>Im going for the option of Topic of your choice! And just name it, “International Experience: Immigration to United States”.</p>
<p>Haha, what a coincidence. I’m writing about EMIGRATION to Pakistan from the USA. I think it would be a strong topic to write about, especially considering that you have moved so recently and in such a crucial year of your life.</p>
<p>haha, coincidence. I dont know some people say that colleges get a lot of immigration essays, unless you have a strong idea of how to showcase it, dont do it! Thats why I wanted help making it a strong essay!</p>
<p>Bump Bump^</p>
<p>I’m writing a similar one but mine’s on the movement from a rural city to a urban city. Anyway yours is a really good essay topic, but try to also add on why you want to go to that college and more about yourself.</p>
<p>well i want it to be more like a story that reflects on me, not me telling about my self. Can I get any ideas on how to start or construct the body. Anything will be highly appreciated because im still stuck on it with no time what so ever.</p>