College Essay, could someone look over? needs to be submitted asap.

Applying to College
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<p>hey ya'll</p>

<p>i have a college essay that i have to submit by monday, and im in the process of finishing it up.</p>

<p>i dont really have any lit teachers this semester, and the ones last year dont remember me, so i need all the help i can get!</p>

<p>i would like to keep it confidential :P so if anybody would offer their time, i would greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>thanks!!</p>

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<p>or... can someone tell me if adding a little humor is bad?</p>

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<p>ill have a look and ill give ya some feedback ;)</p>

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<p>send it my way :)</p>