College Essay for USC

<p>hello, my names Allie and I just finished my essay for USC. I'm looking for constructive criticism, or any criticism in general. It's a somewhat deep essay, but I would really like to have someone look at it. If interested please send me your email.
thank you in advance!</p>

<p>Best,
allie</p>

<p>i’ll read your essay if you are willing to critique mine</p>