College essay help- is it cliche?

<p>I'm a minority (hispanic) attending a top prep school, and I kind of reflected on that in my essay. I have no idea if thats incredibly cliche, but I'd love it if someone read it and gave feedback!
Thanks =]</p>

<p>I would like to read it. PM me.</p>

<p>And as long as it is executed well, I think the topic will help you.</p>

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