College Essay Help !

<p>hey guys,
So I've written one essay so far for the UC school system but I find myself stumped with the second prompt, "Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?" I have a few ideas, but im not sure how to make it as creative as my first essay. Would anyone be willing to read my ideas and give me some advice please. Ive been working on this for about 3 weeks and have gotten virtually no where.</p>

<p>sure. PM me. I’ll give it a read.</p>