COLLEGE ESSAY HELP!!!!!!

I would really appreciate it if someone that has done the whole college application thing can offer their own perspective on my essay, and help with grammatical and contextual errors. My applications have all been very last minute, and extremely stressful as I previously lived in London and did not know I was going to apply to colleges in America. If anyone, out of the kindness of his/her heart, could help read my short essays it would help reassure me .
HELP ASAP PLEASE

Hey I’ve done the app process. I am senior, but I finished the process already and would love to give feedback. Pm me

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I could give you some feedback if you’d like, just pm me