<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>As I getting ready to apply to school in the States, my college essay is a big step. I spent a lot of time writing it and I would need perspicacious comments and feedback. My first language not being English, I would truly appreciate someone looking at my essay and give me helpful tips/ideas/comments. I am not sure whether I should post my essay essay because of plagiarism so please PM me so I can send it to you.</p>
<p>Thank you a lot in advance,
Lea</p>