Hey guys so I submitted my applications on November 1 and I have been having a really hard time sleeping at night because I’m really scared I won’t get into any of my colleges.
I have a decent transcript and a lot of extracurriculars but I feel like my essay might suck. Would someone be willing to read my essay and tell me what they think so I can decide whether or not I should write another essay and apply to other colleges for RD?
Please PM me or list your email address if you’re interested to look at my essay. I showed my essay to my teacher and she liked but I need a second opinion ANY feedback is welcome good and bad I need an honest review if it says a 6 year old wrote please tell me it does.
If it helps I’m a resident of NY who is applying to these schools
Fordham University
SUNY at Binghamton
SUNY New Paltz
SUNY Oswego
SUNY Albany
New York Institute of Technology
Thank you so much for your time!