College essay reader?

<p>I've written two, one on an influential person and one on an important event. I'm not sure about which projects a better picture of me, so I haven't decided on which one to use. If anyone could give me their opinion on which is better, or offer pointers on how to improve either one, I'd really appreciate it!</p>

<p>I will take a look. PM it to me. Hopefully you have fully proof read it first.</p>