<p>I am applying to fairly selective schools. The essay is supposedly the part which allows you to set yourself apart from other students.
Please read my essay to let me know if it is too informal or too risky for schools such as Princeton and Yale :)
I'll message you if you are interested.</p>
<p>ill read it for you!</p>
<p>I"ll read it.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to peer-edit (also applying to both of those schools).</p>
<p>sent, thanks guys!</p>
<p>Happy to take a look if you need one.</p>
<p>Hi supercools</p>
<p>Just curious which school you have finally selected. Can I get some advise on college essay writing? I am also applying to highly selected schools but essay looks tricky to me. Any suggestion is appreciated. Thanks</p>
<p>I can help, if you want!</p>
<p>Sent from my MB865 using CC</p>
<p>@drac313 and Slicekick, I sent them to you guys.
@Slicekick, I’m still a senior applying, I haven’t decided on any schools yet, haha.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it! PM it over :)</p>
<p>I’ll be applying ED to Wharton so for both of us the essays are going to be crucial; PM it over and I’ll give an honest criticism</p>
<p>Send it over :)</p>
<p>I’d take a look :)</p>
<p>I will trade essay for essay? Or I can just take a look at yours. Either way, I am curious about the “riskyness” of the essay.</p>
<p>Sent from captainbrohab forward 
@cardoza, if you would like me to read your essay, I will be willing to!</p>
<p>I would love to read it.
Would you mind reading over mine?</p>