<p>This is the one I applied EA to Stanford with and I'm not sure if I want to use it for RD because of some concerns:
-Structure makes it seem like an English class essay
-I don't focus on one single thing, rather I try to expound 3 of my facets
-it's 800 words</p>
<p>Okay, so anyone who wants someone to read over and critique a college essay and is willing to do the same for me can PM me the essay with "College Essay Trade" in the title. Or if you'd rather get my essay first, post here and I'll PM it to you and you can PM me yours afterward (or you can just read mine :D). </p>
<p>I'll read it. (I'll send you mine if you're worried about essay copying and such, just for good faith, but I'm not looking for feedback at the moment).</p>
<p>My English teacher has told me that I have written two of the best essays that she has ever read. There. I am crediable. I know what I am talking about and will read your essay for "free"!</p>