<p>who wants to be a real help and critique one??????</p>
<p>I'll try my best if you would like, just pm me.</p>
<p>i will help too</p>
<p>i will give it my best shot..pm to me and i will get back to you</p>
<p>I'll give it a shot - pm me</p>
<p>i'll be a real critic lol :D</p>
<p>i'd be glad to if you still need help.</p>
<p>ill read it and comment</p>
<p>send here ..i will try to but wont promise ...(must be realistic)</p>
<p>sent to all...i made some changes and would like a couple further reviews please!!</p>
<p>bump............</p>
<p>If you still need a reader I'll read it. If not..good luck with it.</p>
<p>P.S. Beware of sending it to people with few posts..as some people come on here just to steal essays. Adhere to the 10 post rule.</p>
<p>ill give it a read and give you my opinion</p>
<p>actually, i thought it was the 100 post rule</p>
<p>rExRuN467 you need to clear up some space and thanks for the heads up</p>
<p>me too.................</p>
<p>PM it to me too, i'll be glad to help :)</p>
<p>yo you can send it to me now. I cleared up some space.</p>
<p>ill read it!</p>
<p>brutual honesty here i come, pm me</p>
<p>i'll take a look</p>