college essay

<p>would someone be willing to read my college essay and be so brutally honest about it?
feelings would not be hurt!!!
I just really can't tell if what I'm writing is good enough or not</p>

<p>PM it my way! I sort of love proofreading, so I’ll be glad to do it!</p>

<p>I just joined so i can’t PM!! what should i do?!?</p>

<p>Really, you can’t PM? Weird. Try clicking on someones name and the send private message option should be below.</p>

<p>just post post till 15 posts…you’re reaching it…and then you can PM others</p>

<p>BTW I’ll read and give some comments</p>

<p>well, I am really not sure if you receive my feedback, but actually I’ve sent it twice. If you don’t receive it, please tell me. It seems that here’s something wrong with my network.</p>

<p>pm me…</p>

<p>I’ll give it a tough read.</p>

<p>-d</p>

<p>Sure, PM it to me…i can be brutal though!</p>