college essay

<p>helloo</p>

<p>so i finally started on my college essay and anyone wanted to help me (like, read it, tell me your honest opinion, and then tell me what i can do better)</p>

<p>just post here and ill send it to you</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>:)</p>

<p>oh and i was just wondering if the topic i picked was appropriate or not. prompt:Please tell us more about yourself. Relate one or more experiences or circumstances that have contributed to your personal and/or academic development.</p>

<p>I’m going to talk about how I was a foreign exchange student in Mexico and a really big difficulty I had while I was there: being one of the first people in teh school to be out and gay.</p>

<p>I’ll read 10 char</p>