<p>Can someone read my college essay and tell me what impression it gives/how to imrpove it? I think its pretty damn near exactly what I want to get across. I've edited pretty extensively, but as many opinions as possible helps. Reply and I'll send or PM it.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance to all who reply!</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>Go ahead. </p>
<p>If you can get it to me tonight/tomorrow I'll probably have time to look at it. If not, I might not.</p>
<p>i'd be happy to take a look at it for you!</p>
<p>I'll read it, PM me!</p>
<p>if you can pm me by sept. 19, I will have time to read your essay.</p>
<p>Hey, PM me.</p>
<p>i'd like to read it too</p>