<p>I thought it was funny, but I didn’t think it jumped out at me and just "WOW"ed me. He was smart to mention though that they had met before, regardless of where it was. That instantly gets the readers attention. I mean if I had met someone the previous summer and they took the initiative to email me x months later about a job, I’d be slightly impressed. Anyway, that’s my take on it. Didn’t wow me but he approached the whole situation in the correct way.</p>