Hi All,
I have completed my personal essay, and my mom and I both think it’s beautifully written. But my friends suggested that I make the essay more about myself, so colleges can see that perspective. Can you guys read my essay and tell me what you think? Thanks 
I can! If you can read my common app essay too, that would be great.
@AnnieBot yes, that’s awesome! I’ll pm you mine, and you can send back yours!
@challey717 Absolutely!
@challey717 @AnnieBot I turned my apps in but I have a bit of post-submission anxiety. I would be willing to read your guys’ essays and would appreciate it if you guys could read mine, too.
I would love to read your essay. Pm me yours, I’ll respond with mine, and then we can give each other our comments. @IAmTheGOAT
@IAmTheGOAT Lol same here. PM me first with yours, and I’ll respond with mine.
I can read it.