COLLEGE STUDENTS: Is this Common App essay good enough for top colleges?

College Essays
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<p>I have finished my second draft, and although I like this essay I can't really tell if it's great. My favorite school is Johns Hopkins, and I'd really like to know if what I've written is good enough for acceptance. If you're interested in reading it and giving me feedback, post here and I'll PM you!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too</p>

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<p>ill read it also if you need someone else</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>i would love to give you some suggestions.</p>

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<p>I’ll read anyone’s:D</p>

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<p>If you still need help, I’d be happy to give it a read.</p>

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<p>If you still need help, I’d be happy to give it a read.</p>

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<p>PM I will read it.</p>

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<p>I’m up to read it still</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>Hey guys! Sorry I’ve been busy and I haven’t been paying attention to my thread. I sent a PM to those of you that have been members for a while & have posted a decent amount.
Thanks!</p>

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<p>Shoot it to me! maybe i can help!</p>

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<p>If you still need some feedback, feel free to send your essay over with your prompt.</p>