College Supplements: Avoiding the typical?

<p>I felt really confident about both my college supplements. But today, I was reading US News and they said that if you have "And so, I would be proud to be part of the class of 2014 at Blah University" at the end of your supplement it's a typical error that would be like getting a "check minus" on a supplement.</p>

<p>The issue is, one of my supplements ends with "I hope to be one of these students who advances the world, and who proudly attends Boston University." But it flows so perfectly with the rest of my essay! I don't know what to do; do I change it? Is it that typical and that horrible?</p>

<p>HELP PLEASE! Thank you :) And if you have ANY more typical errors that students make on college supplements please share. It'd be very helpful!</p>