<p>Today’s SAT question of the day confused me a little, so I am posting this one here:</p>
<p>Part of the following sentence is in capital letters; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.</p>
<p>Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN’S AWARENESS and appreciation for the sounds of spoken language.</p>
<li>sharpen childrens awareness</li>
<li>sharpens childrens awareness of</li>
<li>are what sharpens the awareness of children</li>
<li>sharpens the awareness of children</li>
<li>is to sharpen childrens awareness</li>
</ol>
<p>I took answer 4. Wrong. Answer 2 firstly seemed to be the right one to me, but the “of” at the end sounds too weird, doesn’t it? Collegeboard says that 2 is the right one. Isnt it an “of” too much?</p>
<p>infinitives such as listening always takes the singular verb since infinitives are singular. The mistake in the first sentence is "sharpen" which is plural, while it should be "sharpens" which is singular :)</p>
<p>Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN'S AWARENESS and appreciation for the sounds of spoken language.</p>
<p>It has an"of" in there because it refers to the "sounds of spoken langauge"... at the same time... "appreciation FOR" the "sounds of spoken language"</p>
<p>Basically, without the "of" in there...the "CHILDREN'S AWARENESS" wouldn't be able to relate to the "sounds of the spoken language" </p>
<p>I don't know if you understand what I am trying to convey. In short, you need OF in there because you have appreciation FOR the sounds of spoken language.</p>
<p>Hm... I think it's 2, but the "of" is wrong, so it can't be 2. Did you accidentally type "of" at the end, or is it intentionally there? I see what Diaphontes is saying, but are you sure that the of is correctly used in this context?</p>
<p>The "of" is correct. What's confusing you is the sentence's inclusion of "and appeciation for". Remove that clause, and the sentence as written reads:
"Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN'S AWARENESS the sounds of spoken language."</p>
<p>That's now obviously incorrect. It should be:
"Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN'S AWARENESS of the sounds of spoken language."</p>
<p>The full sentence would then read:
"Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN'S AWARENESS *of *and appreciation for the sounds of spoken language."</p>
<p>Another way to think of it is parallelism. "Appreciation for" is correct, so "awareness" also needs something after it to connect to "the sounds". In this case, the missing word is "of".</p>
<p>You need of in there.
Listening to good storybooks SHARPEN CHILDREN'S AWARENESS and appreciation for the sounds of spoken language.
Think of it this way, awareness and appreciation for the sounds.... appreciation fits with for, but awareness for does not make sense. Therefore we add of, which makes it sound better. Awareness of and appreciation for the sound. And obviously the SHARPEN needs to be SHARPENS.</p>