Decision: Rejected
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2260 (790 Writing, 750 Math, 720 Critical Reading)
SAT II: 740 Chemistry (never took chemistry in high school, self-studied chemistry myself)
720 Math 2
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.88
Weighted GPA: 4.44
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): school does not rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP World History (5), AP US History (5), AP Comp Sci (4), AP Statistics (4), AP Bio (4, self-studied), AP Chemistry (3, self-studied)
Senior Year Course Load: AP English, AP Calculus BC, AP Physics C, AP Spanish, AP Music Theory, Wind Ensemble,
Jazz Ensemble
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar with Distinction, Consecutive medalist in the All-American Chinese Calligraphy Competition
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
- Chinese calligraphy club at High school (founder, president),
performed/volunteered in various community cultural events.
Held 7 solo Chinese calligraphy and brush painting exhibitions through the greater Boston area.
- Professional Theatre Actress, Actors' Equity Membership Candidate, performed in numerous professional productions in Boston including a world-premiere play and a east-coast premiere play
- Music director and show accompanist for an organization that produces a full-scale musical with 5th grade students each year
- Singer in Boston Children's Chorus. Member of the highest level choir. Sang in Carnegie Hall, Royal Albert Hall (London), Boston Symphony Hall, Jordan Hall. Toured nationally and internationally.
- Trumpet - accepted into the Eastern MA Jr Districts Band, member of a selective youth symphony, member of high school's symphony, wind, jazz ensembles, marching band, and play in pit orchestra for school musicals
- Piano - ABRSM grade 8 (highest grade)
- Participated in a language exchange program in Buenos Aires, Argentina. Studied at an argentine private school, and lived with a local host family for three weeks
Volunteer/Community service:
Have been playing music for seniors at a local nursing home weekly since 2014. Consecutive recipient of Community Service Award for performing more than 20 hours of service each year. National Honors Society member
Summer Activities:
Freshmen summer - went to Columbia summer program for high school students, took a course on film history and a course on literature
Sophomore summer - went to Cornell summer college, took a condensed 6-week introductory chemistry course and a course on evolution. Courses were counted in college credit
Junior summer - took a film making course and a entrepreneur course at NYU. Wrote, directed, and shot a short film.
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App (10/10) - one of the best personal essays I’ve written in years. I wrote about my experience growing up in a poor, unsophisticated little town in northern China, coming to the US and seeing how infinite the world is, and returning to the town to find myself envious of the town’s people’s obliviousness to the size of the world. This realization pushes me to work diligently to honor those people in my town who may never have the opportunity to leave and go live in a world of opportunities like I do.
Columbia Supplements (10/10) - gave my best on those, have no regrets. Wrote about how I felt in love with columbia when I attended their summer program during the summer of my freshman year. Wrote about my passion for cultural diversity, tolerance and inclusion. Also wrote about my passion in film, and how I pursued it by taking film classes at Columbia and NYU.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 9/10 - did not read, from my Honors Spanish teacher who said I am one of the most analytical, intricate/thoughtful person he has ever taught.
Teacher Rec #2: 6/10 - did not read, from my Honors math teacher, earned an A in her class, but could be pretty generic because we did not talk a lot, so I’m unsure about how well she knows me.
Counselor Rec: 7/10 - did not read, I honestly don’t really know about this one. But my counselor knows that I self-studied chemistry and AP Biology, and my background as an immigrant who only came here in 7th grade.
Additional Rec: One from a film professor at NYU who taught me during a summer film-making course at NYU. Another from the manager of activities in the nursing home in which I have been playing music every week for the past three years, she offered to write this additional letter for me!
Interview: 8/10 - I was interviewed by an alum who did not even know what is a symphony orchestra. Honestly felt like I knew so much better than my interviewer did. But I responded his questions with a lot of detail and passion, and my interviewer said I was a very unique candidate and someone who deserves to be looked at closely. This interview definitely did not hurt me, but don’t know if it made a difference.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Film Studies/Astrophysics/Music
State (if domestic applicant): MA
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Asian - Chinese
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: Middle class
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First generation college, Immigrant
Reflection
Strengths: Very unique and focused extracurricular activities - showed my passion and perseverance for the music/art/performing arts, essays, the fact that I self-studied chemistry and AP biology
Weaknesses: AP scores could be higher, GPA could be higher, being Asian, some rec letters could be stronger, maybe a higher critical reading score would help?
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: rejected by my dream school… huge disappointment…:(((((( but I’m long used to hard work not getting recognized… Maybe my scores aren’t high enough as an Asian student applying to an ivy league. But I really don’t know. It’s a matter of chance.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: waiting to hear from UChicago EA, and applying to a whole lot of other schools RD
General Comments: For these extremely selective school, once you meet their score averages, it becomes 80% luck, don’t take decisions too personally.
Wishing everybody lots of luck in this college-search process!!! <3