<p>SO, basically, unlike my Why Columbia essay, this one is actually more or less shaped and basically done up to a point of almost satisfaction...except for when you read it you'll think I totally have no idea what I am talking... It's still a bit bumpy and it is a second draft, so help would be MUCH MUCH MUCH appreciated. I would give anyone who reads this a big hug, but the internet unfortunately prevents me from doing that. But please read my essay and critique, and I would happily return the favor!
P.S. If you are also applying for Columbia ED, I am going to ask you to not read my essay, only because it doesn't help either of us haha. But best of luck to everyone! :)</p>
<p>hey i am actually not applying early decision to columbia, or anywhere else, ha. And i would be happy to critique your essay if you would critique mine as well. Just PM yours over and I will PM mine if thats cool with you</p>
<p>Thanks! Just sent</p>
<p>Bump bump bump! :)</p>
<p>But I will provide an MLIA for entertainment…but no really, help desperately needed haha </p>
<p>Today in my English class, my teacher handed back our in-class essays from the previous day about something we always wanted but could never have. I wrote about how I always wanted to ride a giraffe at the zoo. My English teacher wrote at the bottom, “You’re not alone.” MLIA</p>
<p>I like giraffes</p>
<p>pm me i will definitely take the time to help you out! i am not applying to Columbia AT ALL so no worries</p>
<p>Bumppppppp</p>
<p>I’ll read it =)</p>
<p>Anyone else? :D</p>
<p>i’m applying to cornell but i’d love to read it! :D</p>
<p>not applying, i’ll read</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>can send me, but help me edit mine too, ok?</p>
<p>Thanks everyone! :)</p>
<p>pm it over 
i’ll give feedback.
p.s. i’m not applying to columbia</p>