Comm app personal essay. Help?

<p>Would anyone like to read my personal essay? It sounds kinda boring in my opinion, so I need a bit of help with it. If you would like to read it, I'll PM it to you. Thanks for all of the help!</p>

<p>Sure send it over!</p>

<p>thanks!!!</p>

<p>I can help :D:D pm it over</p>