Comment my essay please ^_^

College Essays
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<p>If anyone could be so kind as to read my college essay i would truly appreciate it.
Please no sugarcoating.
Harsh criticisms or compliments, idc i would just like an honest viewpoint from different people
and what i can do to improve, its still a pretty rough my teachers havent seen it yet but still.
Thank you CC'ers</p>

<p>-Dave</p>

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<p>if theres anyone whose willing to read just say so and ill send it to you PM ^_^</p>

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<p>i wouldn’t mind giving it a read</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read it, and ill give you a revised copy.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>