Common App Activity Essay

College Essays
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<p>I'm looking for some readers to critique my activity essay. I need to shorten it a little bit I think.
I'll PM you if interested.</p>

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<p>I’ll read :)</p>

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<p>Thank you! Any one else want to take a gander?</p>

4

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Thanks! Sent it.</p>

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<p>Anyone else want to read it?</p>

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<p>I will! PM me.</p>

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<p>Thanks! Sent it.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to help!</p>

10

<p>i’ll have a read? if you want a fresh pair of eyes from down under :)</p>

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<p>I’ll be glad to read it.</p>

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<p>Sent it! Thanks in advance for the advice.</p>

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<p>pm me too please</p>

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<p>Sent! Thanks again.</p>

15

<p>I’ll give it a shot</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to read it and make give necessary critiques. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>I think you had a lot of readers already, but you can send it to me if you want to have an additional review. I’m pretty free right now :)</p>

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<p>Sent it! Thanks for the reads.</p>

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<p>Ill read and give advice!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it. PM please!</p>