<p>To clarify I've already applied ED to Penn. That being said, I would still like to see what my essay was lacking and/or needed improvement on. This is kind of a way for me to feel like I'm still doing something about my application.</p>
<p>My common app essay is definitely still in need of review. Particularly I'm looking for critique on length (it's quite wordy). Content is welcomed too, i.e -- Is my essay too clich</p>
<p>I will read them, PM me!</p>
<p>i’ll read and edit it too. if you’ll edit mine in return.</p>
<p>PM me if you like an adult’s perspective. I will not correct your grammatical mistakes but I will comment on your strategy and overall impression of the essay.</p>
<p>I would be happy to help. PM me with the topic, your essay, and an e-mail for me to send it back to you with comments!</p>
<p>I could read if you read some of mine</p>
<p>I can read if you will read mine 
UPenn ones and commonapp- though my opinion on UPenn essay 1 might not be worth much :P</p>