Common App + Cornell supp, anyone willing to read/edit? :]

College Essays
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<p>I'd highly appreciate any editing help I could get with these two essays, as my grammer is definitely not top-notch. thanks!</p>

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<p>PM it. I'm brutally honest but nice about it.;)</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to take a look. Send it over!</p>

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<p>i love to read it !
plz send it over : <a href="mailto:teressilization@gmail.com">teressilization@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Hi khana, </p>

<p>I am willing to critique your essays ... if you return the favor for me for my essays. Trading essays is the best. </p>

<p>However, I prefer communicating by e-mail so that my inbox isn't always so stuffed and so that I can attach my essay critique on a Word documents (I put comments as ToolTips directly over problem areas so that you know where to correct things). Just PM me and we can trade e-mail addresses.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at your essays if you like, just pm it over!</p>

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<p>Why not ! I'll be glad to help u out. PM it</p>

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<p>Hey, pm it to me; I'd be happy to read it.</p>

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<p>i am applying too. if u read mine, i would read urs.. haha PM me</p>

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<p>I would love to read it.</p>

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<p>hey! 'd be happy to take a look and offer feedback.</p>

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<p>I too will be brutally honest, but constructively</p>