<p>Hello Everyone!</p>
<p>I posted my common app essay on here a while ago, and was told that it was far too much about the person I'm writing about and not enough about me. </p>
<p>I have since revised (read rewrote) it. Would anyone care to read it?</p>
<p>BTW-203 days 'til Princeton decisions come out. Scary!!!</p>
<p>Whoops… that’s 199 days. Even Scarier!</p>
<p>I’ll read it but I’m a fellow Class of 2014 applicant to Princeton. Rest assured however that I’ve written my own essays already. </p>
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<p>This is a very common mistake that’s only far too easy a trap to fall into.</p>
<p>I can read it if you are willing to send it to me. Princeton is my second choice so far and I am going Early MIT/ Caltech haha. But I’d like to give some suggestion and get a feel for what other people are writing about. So it helps me and you.</p>
<p>If I were you, I wouldnt give your essay to anyone on this website. Just give it to your teachers, family members and friends. Although most people might want to help you, there are some that might use certain aspects of your essay in their own. GL and I am sure you will do fine. (I have helped other people as well but then I realized the potential problems this could cause so I stopped).</p>