Common app essay 625 words. Anybody willing to take a look at it?

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<p>I finished my essay but would still like someone to look at it. I don't feel comfortable posting it here though but I'd PM/e-mail/instant message it to whoever is willing to go over it.</p>

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<p>pm me if you want…
but help me look at mine, too ??</p>

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<p>Ill read it PM me please</p>

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<p>I’ll read it… PM it</p>

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<p>I’ll gladly look over it (:</p>