<p>I know it's cliche topic, but I did my best to convey my feeling through the essay.</p>
<p>Could any one read it over and give some comments or make corrections?</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>I will. Wanna trade essays? PM me</p>
<p>I’ll critique it.
I’ve had some good practice lately lol</p>
<p>If it’s not too depressing, I’ll read it</p>
<p>i will read it, if you’re comfortable with it.</p>
<p>im a senior applying to carleton, grinnell, macalester, reed, oberlin, lewis and clark, university of washington, and western washington.</p>