<p>Would anyone be willing to give me some advice on my Common App essay?</p>
<p>Option #1. Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. </p>
<p>It's almost complete. I just need some advice on how to close the paragraph I'm on. I can then write a conclusion.</p>
<p>Also,</p>
<p>Would anyone be willing to look over my essay that talks about my years in Taekwondo?
Taekwondo is a Korean martial art.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>