Common App Essay: Any kind souls willing to look at?

<p>I'm applying Early Decision and I'd like to get some feedback on my essay.</p>

<p>If possible, I'd like to request non-09ers but I understand most people who frequent this forum are applying this year.</p>

<p>I tried an uncommon approach to the essay and wondering if someone could evaluate how effective it is.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>hey im a soph in college pm it over if u want (it may take me a couple of days to look at it)</p>

<p>Anyone else?</p>

<p>Not applying to NU so sure.</p>

<p>Hey I'm in class of 09 but I have several essay drafts done already, so we're on the same page! (pun intended =P) So yeah, I'd be glad to take a look and offer some feedback. Send it over!</p>

<p>Still looking for more readers.</p>

<p>pm away if ud like</p>

<p>i'll read if you want.</p>

<p>Lol, I need to get into "essay-writing-mode." If you don't mind me being an '09er, I'll be happy to critique your essay. (Not applying to NU if that's the school your EDing to)</p>

<p>Thanks to everyone who responded so far!</p>

<p>Still looking for a few more readers. I guess I wasn't clear with my original post; I don't mind 09ers but preferrably those not appying to NU ED.</p>

<p>Happy to review.</p>