Common app essay, any takers?

College Essays
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<p>I just finished my fifth try on a common app essay and would appreciate any critique. Post here and I'll pm it to you. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over :)</p>

<p>I just got finished fully critiquing someones and I’m ready for another.</p>

3

<p>send it over if you want to.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you some feedback if you’re interested. PM it over</p>

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<p>PM it to me, I’ll take a look and give you some feedbacks :)</p>

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<p>PM it to me, I’ll read it over :))</p>

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<p>If you still need people to read and critique your essay, PM it to me.</p>