<p>PM or post if you want to read.</p>
<p>CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE</p>
<p>Penn ED is my top choice, I'm also doing Chicago EA, both of which are commonapp. Both of which are using this essay</p>
<p>PM me and i’ll read. i’m not applying to those schools. </p>
<p>and want to switch essays? … i need constructive criticism as well.</p>
<p>I have edited many essays for students and would be happy to edit for content and style and a little grammar but the content and style is really my strength. PM me.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind. PM me!</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it</p>
<p>I can give it a read for you. :)</p>
<p>ill take a look! msg it to me</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, PM</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>