Common App Essay...Anyone want to critique?

College Essays
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<p>let me know and I'll PM it...thanks</p>

2

<p>sure...I'l read it.</p>

3

<p>Sure, pm me.</p>

4

<p>I'll read it and try and give you helpful feedback. You can pm me or not. Your choice! :)</p>

5

<p>anyone else want to take a look?</p>

6

<p>i can't say i'm an expert, but i can read it if you don't mind =)</p>

7

<p>It is my pleasure to help you!! ^_^ !!</p>

8

<p>Sure! I'm all done with mine. :) PM me</p>

9

<p>Can help out too, if help still be in need.</p>

10

<p>i'll read it. pm me.</p>

11

<p>you can PM me if you need help</p>