Common App Essay: Can anyone please read it?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Hi</p>

<p>I am a sophomore transfer applicant. I am applying to 4 top-notch schools (including business schools) from a small lac. Can you please peruse my "why transfer" essay?</p>

<p>I would really appreciate your help and respond back to any of your threads.</p>

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<p>Bump!!!</p>

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<p>anyone plz?</p>

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<p>ill do it if you help me too, give me your email</p>