Common App Essay: Critique Needed

College Essays
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<p>Hello everyone.</p>

<p>I'm applying Early Action to Uchicago, Umich, UNC, SMU, and ED to UPenn
I just finished my draft of my common app essay, which is about 600 ish words long.</p>

<p>Will you guys be willing to give me feedback on my essay?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>awesome beans !
thank you</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look as well</p>

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<p>I 'd be glad to look over it as well.</p>

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<p>Thank you all!</p>

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<p>I’ll review it! PM me!</p>

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<p>@kdecember: did i send you my essay?</p>

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<p>I’ll look at it if you need any more reviews</p>

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<p>il look at it!</p>

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<p>I have a pretty good eye for grammar</p>

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<p>hey I’d appreciate if you could “Archive” or “Delete” some of your old inbox messages so I could send you my critique!</p>

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<p>sry about that.</p>

<p>Just freed it up.</p>