Common App Essay Critique

<p>I would love to get some input on my essay. Anyone?</p>

<p>Send it to me.</p>

<p>what schools are you applying to ?</p>

<p>Harvard Stanford Columbia UChicago and Duke</p>

<p>Ok PM it to me and ill help you out :)</p>

<p>If there’s any other thing you want me to check i can do that for you to.</p>

<p>Thanks a ton. So since I don’t have enough posts to be able to PM people (interesting policy…) I just emailed it to you. And same goes for everyone else.</p>

<p>I really appreciate your help!</p>

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PM it to me and I’ll see what I can do.</p>

<p>To get enough posts</p>

<p>Dang CC is pretty smart about duplicating posts to reach the quota</p>

<p>Sorry about these annoying posts</p>

<p>Just trying to reach my number</p>

<p>Might as well post things remotely interesting…</p>

<p>Always give without remembering & always receive without forgetting. -Brian Tracy</p>

<p>Happiness cannot come from without. It must come from within. -Helen Keller</p>

<p>You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream. -CS Lewis</p>

<p>The happiest people dont necessarily have the best of everything but they make the most of everything.</p>

<p>It is hard to fail, but it is worse never have tried to succeed. - Theodore Roosevelt</p>

<p>A person often meets his destiny on the road he took to avoid it. - Jean de La Fontaine</p>

<p>Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don’t matter, and those who matter don’t mind. -Dr. Seuss</p>

<p>When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot & hang on. -Franklin D. Roosevelt</p>