common app essay critique

College Essays
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<p>hey i've tweaked my common app essay as much as i can. Would anyone be willing to critique it?</p>

2

<p>sure, PM me back</p>

3

<p>PM me if you want. I think your writing is very good judging from that one essay I read. I do hope the suggestions helped.</p>

4

<p>i am great in criticizing
just joking
pm me
i'll be glad to help you</p>

5

<p>I'll read it. pm me.</p>

6

<p>pm me. I'll read it.</p>

7

<p>I'll critique it.</p>

8

<p>i'll do it, i guesss</p>

9

<p>sure, I will help you</p>

10

<p>i can help</p>