Common App essay feedback?

College Essays
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<p>Hi :)
I'm just looking for any kind of feedback haha
I'll message it over if you're interested.
Thanks!</p>

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<p>wanna swap?!</p>

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<p>uh for sure!? haha
ill send mine now :p</p>

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<p>hey, your inbox is full so I cant post back, but I was going to say that I would look into more schools, but Im not sure if I have money for all of the apps, or even for the colleges themselves. the UCs are relatively cheap for their level of education, and they are supposed to have a well rounded approach as well</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll be happy to take a look ~~</p>

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<p>Ill take a look!</p>

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<p>Thanks! I’ll send it over :D</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look as well</p>

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<p>If ya need any more I’ll be glad to look at it!</p>

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<p>Anybody else? :p</p>

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<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine! I consider myself a pretty good writer too . I’ll pm you</p>

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<p>Illllll take a look:)</p>

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<p>thanks, I’ll pm you :)</p>

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<p>you can send it over to me too</p>

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<p>last bump… anyone else want to take a look?</p>