common app essay for BU - needs revised?

<p>hi guys, my common app essay for BU needed to be revised. will any of you be willing to do it? if so, then how should i send it to you? should i post it here or send it to you via emails? please give me any tips on how to do this? the deadline is coming up soon!! it's christmas time and i'm dying by my computer!!
the essay is about culture shock
thank you so much for helping!!</p>

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