Common App essay for Yale- be critical!

<p>I am looking for someone to read my Common App essay for Yale and a few other schools. I have been a writer all my life, so I am looking for someone to be as critical as possible. The prompt I answered is #4, I believe, which asks about challenging a belief or idea. Please PM me or comment here if you would be willing to read my essay (preferably someone not applying to college this year). Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>i’d like to read it.</p>

<p>Hey there, I would like to read and offer feedback =)</p>

<p>I can read it !</p>

<p>If you’d like another pair of eyes to look it over, e-mail me</p>

<p>Id love to read :)</p>

<p>hey man id like to read it, im also working on question 4. </p>

<p>pm it to me or email it to me</p>

<p>I could give you some feedback if you are not afraid of harsh critique (if needed). I’m curious, because prompt #3 (assuming you meant #3, not #4) often leads to an academic essay rather than a personal statement.</p>

<p>oops - looks like you are out of time, so nm, unless Yale was one of those who extended the deadline because of Common App problems.</p>

<p>I can read it though its kind of last minute.</p>

<p>I can read too! Pm me!!</p>

<p>I can take a look as well :). Nice thing Yale extended their deadline!</p>

<p>I can offer feedback as well</p>

<p>I can take a look if you’re still in need of feedback. (: I’m not applying to Yale, so no worries there.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll take a read if you want :)</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like.</p>

<p>pm it to me</p>