<p>if anyone could read over my essay and just tell me whether they think it is good enough or not it would be really helpful. it is risky but im pretty sure its what i want to write about. someone very critical would be nice!</p>
<p>I can, if you don’t mind that I am also currently doing college apps. x3</p>
<p>im pretty confident that nobody really wants to take the risk of writing about what i am so would you mind? thanks:)</p>
<p>Message it to me, haha</p>
<p>i got a half an hour before a family christmas party. </p>
<p>throw it on over.</p>
<p>I will, I’m also an 09er but I have some free time; if you have any doubts then by all means do not send me it :p</p>