<p>I'm not sure if this is too convoluted and I'd like some help tightening it up.
Any non-'10ers willing to give it a read? </p>
<p>It's much appreciated.</p>
<p>PM me.</p>
<p>Full disclaimer: I’m a senior! That said, i think I read one of your essays before. I definitely recognize your username.</p>
<p>Anyway, I’m not applying to any Ivies.</p>
<p>i’ll check your essay, email it to <a href="mailto:kylezkdlf@gmail.com">kylezkdlf@gmail.com</a> and ill try my best to critique your essay</p>
<p>I’d love to read your essay and will try to be as critical as I can! PM!</p>
<p>i would love to read your essay! I am not applying to Ivy League schools, but rather small liberal arts schools maybe two notches down from your schools. pm me</p>