<p>Hey I'm looking for someone to critique my essay, including both the style and the overall idea. I was wondering if it was personal enough and if my attempt at being a little philosophical comes across well or not. </p>
<p>Help please!!</p>
<p>id definitely be willing to critique it and i feel like i would be able to give some good advice, just PM me</p>
<p>feel free to PM me :)</p>